Sunday, 29 March 2009

Gawain comic, 25-27

It's the last of the Prologue!

I have been wondering about the best moment to start doing a finalised version. I think it's best to wait till the first story is done in storyboards, at least, because I may come across things that need clarifying and the Prologue may need editing to accomodate those missing elements.

Meanwhile, here are pages 25 to 27. Click for a readable view...

I hope you enjoyed this first part of the comic!

All constructive criticism is very welcome :-).


Cecilia said...

Sorry if I didn't reply earlier... My relation with internet isn't very regular lately, I started writing again something long for my blog while I'm not spending much time on deviantart. Ah, times change...

Page 25 is one of the best of the whole comic, I believe, and the improved stylization given to Morgana's face by zooming on her works very well (I'd almost suggest to use it for the whole story). In a moment you can capture there's a whole new world under this woman's veil, much broader than what Lot or little Gawain thought before. And that's interesting, for sure :)

ampersand said...

Thank you! :D

I tend to waver between more and less stylised ways of drawing... I am very fond of stylisation, but I am not always sure what serves the story best :/.

My Italian is very bad, but usually I do understand the gist of what you write on your blog. I just wish it had a blog feed, so I could add it to my Google Reader! :)