tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846397398621701622.post8655813363888739424..comments2023-05-14T11:39:38.021+02:00Comments on The Sleeper's Den: TDH pages 6 & 7ampersandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08992284787639430437noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846397398621701622.post-75641542381618076772010-08-27T16:08:38.217+02:002010-08-27T16:08:38.217+02:00Yes, the remark about the inset is one that keeps ...Yes, the remark about the inset is one that keeps recurring. I will have to take some white paint to my page after all... :)ampersandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08992284787639430437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846397398621701622.post-19232397640534786812010-08-24T16:12:41.405+02:002010-08-24T16:12:41.405+02:00bumpbumpthe comics experthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12090146619681946424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-846397398621701622.post-17557390178234632372010-08-24T16:09:53.599+02:002010-08-24T16:09:53.599+02:00Good work on facial consistency & storytelling...Good work on facial consistency & storytelling in both pages, though the inset on page 6 (something I never noticed before) has a weird thing where the tree in the inset seems to continue in the larger panel, making it a little less clear there's a time-jump in-between both. Perhaps a panel border could help there?<br /><br />Talk more soon!<br />--noutthe comics experthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12090146619681946424noreply@blogger.com